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UPDATE: sup people, i hope you are having a good sunday.
Heya guys, i finally, finally started drawing a comic on my own, if its crap, so be it, let it be crap!
But the point is to start moving, a journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step or something like that.
So i tried full manga on this first page, with tones and all that, your opinion is highly appreciated.
I'm still tempted to do it in color, but i also want to keep exploring tones and stuff.
I have redone the first page of Rainfall, i'm not going to redo any other page btw, that would trap me in an endless loop.
here is the original page 1, so you can compare between the two.
I think, i'm improving, little by little.
rainfallcomic.tumblr.com/post/…
Heya guys, i finally, finally started drawing a comic on my own, if its crap, so be it, let it be crap!
But the point is to start moving, a journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step or something like that.
So i tried full manga on this first page, with tones and all that, your opinion is highly appreciated.
I'm still tempted to do it in color, but i also want to keep exploring tones and stuff.
What do you think? also, if you spot something wrong in my engrish lettering, please let me know. xD
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The tones work for the mood and his personality.